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PrincessLion2002
20.07.2002, 02:36
Can you also scale it from 1-10 for me too? Be honest! So, I know what I can do for Part 3. Share your ideas!! A New BegginingPart 1:Hunter walks into the cave, seeing his mate, Cyrstal, lieing on the floor of their cave, with 2 cubs in her arms. "They are beautiful, Cyrstal.", Hunter told her. Cyrstal smiles. "Yes they are." "What shall we name them?", Hunter asked. There, was a boy and a girl. "How about the girl Mika, and the boy Knight?", Cyrstal asked. "They are just right for the new Princess and Prince.", Hunter told her, smiling.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Being A CubPart 2:Mika was wondering around the plains, outside her cave. Her best friend, Bree, was walking with her. "So, what should we do today?", Bree asked. "I dunno.", Mika replied. Just then, Knight, and his best friend, Sulaco, walked up to them. "How did your training go?", Mika asked Knight, she also smiled at Sulaco. Mika had alittle thing for him. "Like any other training.", Knight told her, yawning. "Hey Mika. Hey Bree.", Sulaco says smiling. "Hey Sulaco.", Mika and Bree say together. "Whatever.", Knight says, eyeing the 2, and walks away with Sulaco. All Mika and Bree could do was giggle.So, how did you like it people?? <b>Which Lion King Character Are You? Created by CrazyCoasterCo.<i></i>

Chibi Kiara
20.07.2002, 02:42
I personal give it about a 9.Reson.10 would mean that is in every way is great perfect and nothing is that good! Sorry! But other then that great! <i></i>

PrincessLion2002
20.07.2002, 02:44
Thanks! Do you think I should do a Part 3? <b>Which Lion King Character Are You? Created by CrazyCoasterCo.<i></i>

Coal Chaser
20.07.2002, 04:04
Hehe! Love it! Yes, I think you should make a part 3...4...5! ^-^ Cute storyline! Lemme know if you need any help! All of Bree's pictures; my own and art tradesMy Side 7ThankYou Vilani for the adorable picture! ^-^<i></i>

Sulaco
20.07.2002, 04:05
Very good!! Sulaco also has a little thing for Mika as well....but who is knight? Is he a real character here on the forums or did you just make him up for this?P.S.> Is what our RP is based on (Sunny Day)?? Because i thought Sulaco wasn't supposed to know Bree and Mika really. perhaps in the future though, if they join or create a pride that could work as an RP. I'm looking forward to it. <i></i>

PrincessLion2002
20.07.2002, 23:03
Thanks Bree! Thanks Sulaco! I will let you guys know if I need any help. I am gonna go do Part 3 right now! Knight is Mika's
other. I made him up. Well, I did Sunny Day, before I decided to make a FanFic about them. So, I just made them know eachother when they were cubs! Glad you guys liked it!! <b>Which Lion King Character Are You? Created by CrazyCoasterCo.<i></i>